English Lv 2 Smokey's bar please help me out

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English Lv 2 Smokey's bar please help me out

Postby Sylvia1990 » Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:03 pm

How long should this be? and do I have to write it in a passive voice? I am just stuck :cry:
help me out please? can someone give me some tips?

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Re: English Lv 2 Smokey's bar please help me out

Postby Rhia Hayday » Fri Oct 19, 2012 10:17 am

It should be no more than 1/2 a side, a paragraph really. You should cut out all the descriptive language and speech, and cut it right back to the bare bones. You don't need to worry about making everything into passive voice (this used t be what students had to do, but the assessment has changed now). You are explaining what happens in the story in the simplest and shortest way in this activity.
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Re: English Lv 2 Smokey's bar please help me out

Postby Sylvia1990 » Fri Oct 19, 2012 1:31 pm

Ok thanks a lot :) i was really going crazy because of it ha ha


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